Tuesday, June 19, 2012

That Girl in Pink Walled City - 55 word fiction





Hundreds of eye balls were wandering over her slightly dished out cleavage, while a 'white skinned' blonde who was in her 30's roving in pink walled city. 


Finally, she opened her bag, took a masculine cloth and draped it around her shoulders. Merciless, gigantic sun was still wetting her body, but never mind, at least that piece of cloth could quench thirst of those hundred staring eyes.   



[*This story is result of my own experience while I was with my mom, shopping in Johri Market (Jaipur).]
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10 comments:

  1. Writing BuddhaJune 19, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    Very nicely done.. Awesome.

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    1. The Indian Sales GuyJune 20, 2012 at 4:29 AM

      Thank you so much abhilash....Glad to have your comment here..:)

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  2. TTTJune 19, 2012 at 5:36 PM

    That was great ! so much in 55 words !!!!

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    1. The Indian Sales GuyJune 20, 2012 at 4:31 AM

      Thank you so much Tangy....Your views has always been important for me....Glad you liked..:)

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  3. ashwaryaJune 20, 2012 at 4:23 AM

    Amazing post....loved it.....;)

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    1. The Indian Sales GuyJune 20, 2012 at 4:33 AM

      Thank you for being my consistent admirer ashwarya..:)

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  4. UnknownJune 21, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    That is India for you, my dear :)

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    1. The Indian Sales GuyJune 26, 2012 at 6:15 AM

      Ya right..To me, the kind of reaction these tourists are getting from us, is biggest setback for tourism industry..An unsolvable problem i think...:(

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  5. AmitAagJune 27, 2012 at 10:06 PM

    Wow..Ashish!..amazing man!!:)

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Would Love to hear from you..:)

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